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PostSubject: 24 Bars comments   24 Bars comments Icon_minitimeSat Feb 03, 2007 2:00 pm

You know what it is. I thought this up in Science class, tell me you think
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   24 Bars comments Icon_minitimeSat Feb 03, 2007 5:31 pm

All good... Well Except the last line that was Good... 24 Bars comments Row_361 24 Bars comments Row_577 24 Bars comments Eusa_ang 24 Bars comments Eusa_cla 24 Bars comments Eusa_cla 24 Bars comments Eusa_cla
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   24 Bars comments Icon_minitimeSat Feb 03, 2007 5:38 pm

Yeah I ain't like that line either I put in at the spur of the moment to it an even 24 I might replace it.
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   24 Bars comments Icon_minitimeMon Feb 05, 2007 2:44 pm

Saying that it was completely awesome would be an understatement!!! 24 Bars comments Thumbsup 24 Bars comments Eusa_cla 24 Bars comments Row_577 24 Bars comments Msn_cool 24 Bars comments Eusa_dan 24 Bars comments Thumbsup
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   24 Bars comments Icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2007 4:48 pm

Your wordplay is mad hot! 24 bars is awesome. 24 Bars comments Eusa_dan
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