T-Bot Opinions

I am hoping for some constructive criticism for my T-Bot re-write. Anything except saying that the name T-Bot is retarded would be helpful.

I've been using more description in it and I'm hoping it has turned out a lot better.

Thanks

T-Bot is Retarded Just Kidding

I never read the original but this is pretty good the only thing is (like mine) it just seems a bit rushed but it is a Great story

From what ive read, its fine. You dont need to rush it, because im fairly sure our 9 users wont cause a riot over something that takes 3 days more per issue.
Apart from that, the only other problem i can find is the cheesy name
Then again they let robo cop on TV, so i dont really have a problem.

Oh, and would you be able to work on a way to sticky our work on order? For example, if i have a 3 part series, I would want to finish part 1, 2 and 3, sticky them in order and lock them so nobody could post, making my job easier.
Example.
Instead of it being like below.
Part 3
Part 2
Part 1
Would you work on something like this?
Sticky: Part 1
Sticky: Part 2
Sticky: Part 3
Also, wondering if, after ive locked, could i unlock the post and edit the post?

yeah you can and The order you sticky the posts is the order it stays I think

I love T-bot. The story idea is almost like one of my fantasies (that obviously will never happen) of having a robotic body. But my fantasy doesn't involve getting killed.

dannblood wrote:

From what ive read, its fine. You dont need to rush it, because im fairly sure our 9 users wont cause a riot over something that takes 3 days more per issue.
Apart from that, the only other problem i can find is the cheesy name
Then again they let robo cop on TV, so i dont really have a problem.

Oh, and would you be able to work on a way to sticky our work on order? For example, if i have a 3 part series, I would want to finish part 1, 2 and 3, sticky them in order and lock them so nobody could post, making my job easier.
Example.
Instead of it being like below.
Part 3
Part 2
Part 1
Would you work on something like this?
Sticky: Part 1
Sticky: Part 2
Sticky: Part 3
Also, wondering if, after ive locked, could i unlock the post and edit the post?

You should be able to sticky and lock/unlock everything in your forum. If you can't, let me know. You may be able to post in locked forums while being a moderator, but i'm not sure on that. But yes, you can lock and unlock.

As far as keeping them in order, the simplest way to do that is to edit and re-send them. It should send the last edited message to the top. But if you're labeling them as Part 1, Part 2, etc, it should be easy for readers to figure out which one to start with anyway. But if you really insist they be in order, I can always create sub-forums for you within your forum that can be ordered correctly. Just give me the same information as you would be when requesting a new forum, I need the description and name.

Please ask this in the correct forum next time though!

jimbob wrote:

I never read the original but this is pretty good the only thing is (like mine) it just seems a bit rushed but it is a Great story

Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by rushed though. The original is still up here

I wish you'd describe character appearances and settings. But interesting none the less

Thats what I mean by Rushed... Description ios most peoples Downfall and Sadly Andy... Me and you have that Downfall *SHOCK SHOCK HORROR HORROR*

Thanks I'll work on that. T-Bot #3 should be up in the next few days. I am also planning two more (short) originals for AC along with Migori whenever I get to that.

Like the new issue Andy! Only problem is there should've been a more emotional goodbye, he has strived tirelessly to bring back his son and he has become a murderer. That's the only critisism though ;) Keep it up!

You're probably right. I was mainly just focusing on the panic that would be pretty strong at the moment, knowing that police would be there at any moment.

Also if anyone's confused, I didn't complete #3 yet, I just couldn't write anymore and I wanted to post something so everyone would know i'm still alive.

Yeah, I was gonna assume your posistion because you've been dead latley... like this whole place *Tumbleweed rolls by*. Anyway If you're posting more then good luck!

Erm, I think the cheesy name was my fault.


This is Monkeydude, by the way. I just checked DBV tonight for the first time in however long and was quite sad to see DBV gone. I've grown attached to that story over the years and I always thought it would be there. Ah well, such is life.

I came over here and decided to register. I promise to be more active but what is a promise on the online world?

FromTheMirage wrote:

Erm, I think the cheesy name was my fault.


This is Monkeydude, by the way. I just checked DBV tonight for the first time in however long and was quite sad to see DBV gone. I've grown attached to that story over the years and I always thought it would be there. Ah well, such is life.

I came over here and decided to register. I promise to be more active but what is a promise on the online world?

Don't worry, I have all of DBV and it will be re-posted on this site. The only episodes missing will be Part 2 of the Last saga.