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Subject: Be cautious comments Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:32 am
Drop some advice. Peace.
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Subject: Re: Be cautious comments Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:41 am
I wont front it was really good your hook was good also. Among my favorite lines are "When you see niggas roll 30 deep on streets/ Like England in Iraq you better learn to retreat"
That so true though I liked you r 34 bars better this one was good to
8/10
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Subject: Re: Be cautious comments Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:03 am
Thanks yo, one of my biggest fans. And the England comment ... I`m trying to encorporate punchlines more
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Subject: Re: Be cautious comments Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:14 am
Thats cool, looking forward to more of your works.
Subject: Be cautious comments 
Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:32 am
though I liked you r 34 bars better this one was good to