Team Beta comments

Yeah I'm Mega Cartman, so tell me how my 2005 epic is. I knpw the dialogue suck so don't tell me.

I read Chapter one and I have to Say, Wow... Great Descriptive, Some of which I had to Read Twice so my Brain could make sense of it. Great Idea and excellent Description, I can't comment on Plot as I've only read First Chapter. Go You

Thanks, I posted all the chapters up. But you should read alittle more, it gets better as it continues, The plot is basically they're suppose to reflect what the government would do if could control super heros.

I only read the first chapter, but I liked it. Usually I wouldn't be into this kind of thing, but I think that I could get into Team Beta.

Thanks I posted about 9 chapters there won' t than that either...

Don't post anymore just yet, Otherwise I won't beable to keep up .

I only read 2 chapters, but that was enough to get me interested.