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Son Gohan Illustrious
Gender : Location : Singapore Posts : 144 Reputation : 2
| Subject: Ketsudai Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:45 am | |
| chapter0: Prologue Setting: Japan. Ruin. Not much building. Only flower field and grassland with some lake and fountain. Fictional 22 century.
17 year ago, a meteor shower rain down on Earth's 7 ocean causing Tsunami and volcano eruption all over the world. Wiping out 10% of human population. The meteors however carry element and cell from outer space. This event cause a accelerate evolution among the human race allowing them to achieve a body that appearance remain the same but with new abilities. | |
| | | Son Gohan Illustrious
Gender : Location : Singapore Posts : 144 Reputation : 2
| Subject: Re: Ketsudai Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:46 am | |
| Chapter 1: let us all keep saying "see you again" rather than goodbye
A fire is burning inside a cave silently. Nothing is seen in the illuminated room except for a writing near the yellow flame. What is written is "the blood era is here". And the flame went out.
A girl is walking across the wasteland, covering her face with a big hat, going againist the eastern wind.
Girl:that is quite a wind. Almost resemble those seen at the desert
then, a sandstorm is heading toward her. This naturally cause her to panic and start to frantic and running away in circle.
Girl yelling in a rather comedic fashion: Why the sandstorm is still heading toward me?
At this life and death situation, a man in dark coat seemly teleport out of the air, landing in front of the girl. This action last like 3 minutes, when in reality the time just pass for a few seconds.
the Girl returning back to the reality, yelled out to the mysterious man: Run away, this is danger
the man lift up his index finger and touch the sandstorm, which now is only a meter away from the duo, and an unexpected event happen in front of the girl's eye. The sandstorm cease.
Girl stunned: You are an ability user.
the man seem to be untethered by her words, but this action convey a lot of words to the girl. The man began to walk off but...
Girl: My name is Mikagami Rushuna. what is your name.
The man in coat did not reply and walk off. But drop a piece of paper. Rushuna picked it up and plan to return it, but the man back is nowhere to be seen.
Rushuna took a peek at the note and realize it is meant for girl: Ketsudai. that is your name huh. Let meet again. properly under this red era.
At this time, Rushuna steps on a quicksand. And get out with the help of a dark hair teen.
Rushuna catching her breath: thank you
Dark hair teen smirk: hey, do you like bananas. | |
| | | Son Gohan Illustrious
Gender : Location : Singapore Posts : 144 Reputation : 2
| Subject: Re: Ketsudai Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:46 am | |
| Chapter 2: it is dangerous to litter around
Rushuna stood there in confusion, taken surprise by both the mysterious teen and by his weird question. But what really froze her is the strange ominous feeling emitting from the teen.
“What is this feeling? It feels like it is sucking my existence away…..am I still alive or am I dead.” Rushuna thoughts keep running wild, unable to keep herself collected.
“Hello, are you still here, missy” The teen close up the gap between the two and stare at Rushuna’s eye. This action causes a response from Rushuna and the sound of a slap echo through the land, clearly.
“That so harsh” the teen say in a playful manner, “but it is not good to anger me”
And a bunch of guys came down and surround Rushuna instantly.
“Those soldiers with him…, are the soldier from the poker army. Then, he is”
“That right, I am one of the 56 commanders of the poker army. Four of spade, that the rank given to me by this world god”
“So this is a commander, the feeling I getting from him is the ultimate prove. But”
The teen is seen chomping down banana one after another
“How can he eat those bananas one after another like a delicacy….no even more why is he eating the bananas like he is doing a B******. He is a man, right.”
Then, the commander gave his order, lifting up his right hand and pointed at Rushuna
“Oi, do you wanna be my girl”
That sentence came out from the teen mouth, as another breeze blew through the land again, is so common used in drama and anime that it triggers off Rushuna’s memory of the old world. But she reply nevertheless
“No” she replies with dignity
“It cannot be help. I command you all as the four of spade, Shaun Fulatisma, to kill that girl in the name of our emperor, to purify the world.” The teen command as he reveals his name to Rushuna as he began to take his leave after he had given his command
Rushuna quickly take a stance and grab something hidden in her coat. But then a man wearing a dark coat seemly appears out of thin air. Even without seeing that man’s face, she knew who it is at once. For she seen this action, merely a few minutes ago. Shaun looks back when he heard a sudden rustle among his man. Such action is rarely seen as discipline uphold well in the army. Violating the rules is unacceptable and the punishment is severe. And he smirks to himself.
“Here is one interesting guest we have”
You see, while they might not know who Ketsudai was, he is the reason why a commotion is cause. But rather the symbol that is revealed when he jerk off his coat.
A white tree that reach out toward the sky and penetrate the cloud. This is obviously a symbol of the resistance who give the empire their hardest when the current emperor just ascends the throne. The symbol of the White forest, Shiromori
The soldier charge. Be it the man is a renowned member of the resistance or not, it does matter. Anyone associated with the Shiromori will be wanted dead by the empire. And here lies one of the big preys, the soldiers are eager to kill the man. To claim their reward and receive a promotion.
But sadly, the power levels are too far. Even though the odd is against him, ketsudai easily take down most of the soldier swiftly as his slice their body apart, sending the blood flying across the land as well as having some them tainting his black shirt, previously hidden by his coat. But there is one last soldier; he manages to hide at one of Ketsudai blind spot.
Not letting the chance go away, he leap toward him. But he tripped over one of the bananas skin left behind by his commander and had his head stab into his prey’s blade.
“Lucky, aren’t you” Shaun stepped into the battlefield after all the soldier had been killed, walking over the pile of lifeless body
“Yeah. Thank for your assistance” Ketsudai sheath his blade as he close up the distance to his opponent to a few inches.
“Your welcome. Beside, I will not let that man live if he ever gets you anyway. I will receive the promotion.” Shaun replies as he crushes one of the soldier head with his legs.
“A commander already and still wishes for promotion. Is there a rank among you guys that I don’t know of” the member of the resistance asked, as he sends a spark toward his enemy’s eyes.
“Who know? Maybe yes maybe no. I had no idea” the commander reply as he took a stance preparing for a death match “Guess I will find it out, with your death”
Silence last for a moment. And the two man charge toward each other as the battle began. Whoever wins shall live, and the one to lose shall die. Who will draw the first blood in the battle between the resistance and the empire? | |
| | | Son Gohan Illustrious
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| Subject: Re: Ketsudai Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:13 am | |
| Chapter 3: The reason why people don't like changes, is because of their love for their past and present
the battle begin with a clash of blows between the fighters' katana. The two fighters quickly push against their opponent trying to establish a stronghold over another. Another few more blows, the two leap backward to keep a distance them. And move into their battle stance again. After a few more eyes exchange, Ketsudai swing his sword down aiming to slice apart Shaun body from his clavicle, more commonly known as the collar bone. This action force a respond from Shaun knowing that if he don't block this attack, he will undoubtedly die.
He raise his blade to block to the attack but in his position, the strength of the attack, gain from the momentum, overwhelm his block forcing the commander, to use his left hand to give support to his block by pushing against the back of his sword. While this move prevent him from dying, it is not without a price. It leave an opening in his abdomen. Ketsudai did not let this chance slip away and threw in a upset punch dealing quite a fair bit of damage.
Shaun groan in pain but this does not stop Ketsudai from attacking. He continues now by thrusting his sword through his opponent 's torso finishing his attack with a kick to the temple of the commander. This sent Shaun flying toward a rock and crush against a boulder. The commander is now coughing out blood now with his opponent standing there relatively unharmed.
“I will not fall like that, I not so weak to be defeated by you so easily” Shaun begin to make threat, yelling across the land to ensure Ketsudai can heard it, like a beast which is nothing more than an empty threat to the resistance's member who is making his way toward the empire's member, dragging his katana along the way.
“taste the fruit of my labour” Shaun scream in rage and charge an energy in within his fist, now cracking with electricity, pouring in every ounce of energy he had in his body.
Ketsudai sensing what is going to follow pick up his pace and creating a loud noise from the kinetic friction.
“it is too late to regret now, take this, Hofukuookami” the four of spade roar as he fires his full charge up attack. A lightning
“You make three mistakes. One, who is afraid.” Ketsudai jump straight up dodging the attack but not without stabbing the electricity attack with his katana. Now, several feet in the air, he threw his katana toward Shaun. It is a hit and the katana stab into the dark hair teen's thigh.
The burning sensation, heated up by the friction and electricity, course through his blood stream.
“Argrrrahhhhh” he scream in agony and nearly pass out, if not for his pride of not wanting to faint in front of his enemy. It is an overwhelming victory to his red eye opponent.
“Second, to think you use that attack as a last resort is damn stupid. Why did you not use it earlier to create an opening or something. You do not have much battle experience I guess.” Ketsudai is now standing in front of Shaun and is looking down on him.
“Those eye I know them, the eye that say the result is expected.....like that man” the thought of it stir up several feeling mostly hatred as seen in the commander's eyes. “Kill me” he spoke
it is a request, to uphold his pride much as he did not want it. It can be seen in his tone, that he had something that have yet to be accomplish but he remains silent. He will not bow down and ask for mercy. A honorable death on the battlefield losing to someone stronger than him. That is his ideal death.
Ketsudai begin to pull out his sword from Shaun's thigh, raising it higher than his wrist as blood drips down from the tips of it.
he close his eyes, preparing for the blow
“With this I will die”
or that is what he thoughts till he heard the sound of a katana sheathing.
“ Thirdly, I shall not kill you”
“why?” his tone made it evident that he is angry. He felt humiliated. He had gave in his all, and he expects death. Yet he is spare of it, out of mercy. It hurt him. The emotional pain now is far greater than his physical pain from the battle.
“don't worry. It is not out of mercy. I need you to convey a message from our leader to your emperor. Tell him, the ceasefire have ended. The same as our alliance from three years ago. But I guess that beside the point since he had re post our wanted poster. The war shall begin again from 2 weeks from now.”
"I will convey it. But tell me first, why do you want to over throne us. It make no sense. No matter how much I think of it, the current world is so much better than the past. the people of the past always think of themselves as the greatest lifeforms. The keep on destroying the environment and even when they know about it, they still go on. Such behaviour do you think it should be change."
"I do not care such thing. What we of the forest wish for is just to claim back our land and history. Our pride."
The teen keep quiet. While he is against the idea of starting a war over something trival like land or history, he know that claiming back the pride will make it worthwhile.
The sword now sheath and the red eye man pick up his coat left on the ground and don it again. Rushuna then run after him.
“What up”
“I want to join the Shiromori. I wish to take part in the upcoming war"
Then, without replying, he grabbed the girl's wrist and the two disappear into thin air.
Meanwhile, Shaun look down and the ground and grabbed a handful of the sand. While he had calm down, he still angry over humiliation from his battle ago. And he swore
“You shall regret it for sparing my life. One day, I will be the one to the deal the final blow to destroy the Shiromori. Not Kaiten nor anyone else. It will be me. I swore on my name.”
Chapter 3 is done. the update is still slow I see. Hopefully I will finish all the way till chapter 10 by school reopen. And here the first battle scene. I must say I bad at it. guess more work to be done. | |
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